Have you felt summer?
Remember that time when you were tired running between the wickets in the cricket game you were playing, hitting the ball for miles.
That time you were in the pool tired doing lane after lane after lane swimming trying to be perfect for the championship for the games .That was summer.
Remember that time that the cicadas were chirping in the trees flys were buzzing the ants were crawling around you. The dust from the wind blowing in your eyes, hay fever annoying you from the flowers, pollen blowing everywhere. That was summer.
Remember lying in the warm grass like it was a electric blanket on low, you looking out for all the insects flying low over looking for something to eat for lunch making buzzing noise,
Tree leaves blowing in the wind. That was summer.
by Katrina
That is cool
ReplyDeleteI love the words you are using.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said that you get tried running between the wickets at cricket because I know that you like cricket
ReplyDeleteCool story Katrina I like how you put in ants crawling around you
ReplyDeleteLove your writing Kat
ReplyDeletethanks everyone how wrote a comment
ReplyDeletekatrina
Wow Katrina your writing really sounds like you
ReplyDeleteKatrina I just love this poem. As I read your piece of writing I had such a vivid picture in my mind that I could just about smell the fresh grass and see the clouds drifting through the clear blue sky - Summer to me.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Mrs Craig.I enjoyed writing the summer writing.It took a bit of time but it was fun bringing back your memoires
ReplyDeleteKatrina
Hi Katrina my name is Puawai I go to Pt England school in Auckland. I like your story it is cool. Wasn'ta it a busy holiday.
ReplyDeleteHi Te Puawai
ReplyDeleteI like my writing too.have you every been to Mahia?That's were my family go sometimes for a holiday.
Katrina